Sub-Page Class Critique
During our class critique we were able to go over the changes with made to our homepage and talk about our decision making process for the sub-page. Overall the main reason of why I chose to design the rules and regulations page was because I thought it would be a challenge for me since there was a lot of content.
Changes on my Homepage
- One of the comments I received about my homepage was how I made the "when & where" smaller and it seems much more appealing.
- They enjoyed the variation between the wheel and how I incorporated it into my favicon.
- Change the gradient in the porthole view (where the image is placed).
Critiques about my Subpage
- My footer was overall more organized form the last pre-critique.
- Icon are good but there is a slight unity issue between my icons because are perfectly flat and others have gradients in them.
- The text in the 4th sections is too dark.
- Recreate my trophy icon. It doesn't reflect my other icons and the half line in the middle of the trophy is distracting.
Changes on my Homepage
- One of the comments I received about my homepage was how I made the "when & where" smaller and it seems much more appealing.
- They enjoyed the variation between the wheel and how I incorporated it into my favicon.
- Change the gradient in the porthole view (where the image is placed).
Critiques about my Subpage
- My footer was overall more organized form the last pre-critique.
- Icon are good but there is a slight unity issue between my icons because are perfectly flat and others have gradients in them.
- The text in the 4th sections is too dark.
- Recreate my trophy icon. It doesn't reflect my other icons and the half line in the middle of the trophy is distracting.
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